Response to Marina's Narrative

Marina- This is a really fascinating piece and seems like it would be perfect for a feature in the Index or the Gazette. You have an obvious interest in your subject and it shows in the quality of enthusiasm that you put into it. One thing that I might be careful about is calling The Tempest, Shakespeare’s most male-dominated play because he has a lot of other ones that are as comparable in the dearth of male roles such as Julius Caesar or Macbeth. It’s a really broad statement that might not be supportable. Nice job, however, weaving in the different perspectives of feminism across different majors and how they incorporate it into their work. What exactly are you trying to say with your conclusion? It sounds nice but perhaps it wraps things up a little bit too neatly for an issue that still seems to be going on- expanding feminism at Kalamazoo College. This is a very interesting draft and I think you have a really great piece here. I look forward to seeing the final piece!