Response to Munirah's Profile

Munirah, I think you have the makings of what could be a really great profile here. First off, I guess, have you been able to talk to the proprietor or anyone who works at the Dairy Mart for an interview? The descriptions that you have are really good and I think if you expand upon them, such as talking to the “grandfatherly, old man” or the “men who ride up on bikes”, this would be seriously great. What are their stories? What brings them to the Dairy Mart? Maybe go back a few more times and find out who the regulars are and talk to them. Maybe even see who from K College goes there and talks to them and find out they feel the Dairy Mart both fits into the community and serves it. This will be a really interesting piece because it is not the usual place that people would go to profile but it is somewhere that is essential for the community providing people with gas, convenience foods, alcohol and lottery tickets. Good luck!